DA Assignment 2

Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti

1.        An article in Campus magazine entitled “Public Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara.

§      Collocation: Taman Siswa with Ki Hajar Dewantara

§      Metonymy: article with Campus magazine

2.        Education paradigma is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the spirit of education these days.

§      Hyponymy: education paradigma with education these day

3.        Citizens should get competent education. Education is responsibility by goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.

4.        Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools.

§      Conjunction (hypotactic): because of

§      Conjunction (paratactic): and, or

5.        Supported by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its education.

§      Reference (anaphoric): this school refers to a type of school having business education.

6.        Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house model).

§      Synonymy: pesantren with Islamic boarding house model

7.        It is classified in to two model; First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can stay and study freely.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): it refers to pesantren

§      Synonymy: model with pesantren

§      Ellipse: Traditional of noun which is deleted the word pesantren

§      Reference (Anaphoric and Cataphoric): it refers to Traditional pesantren

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

8.        They study about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the students

9.        The traditional pesantren still be one choice by our society under class social.

10.    Second, Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students.

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

§      Reference (Anaphoric): it refers to modern pesantren

11.    They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They are prepared to face the era that always changes.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the students

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to modern pesantren

12.    Without already realized the friction that could be happened from motivation or organizer and management of existing education.

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and, or

13.    To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): their and they refers to goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

14.    Poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): they and their refers to poor people

15.    Government and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of education.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): their refers to goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.

§      Ellipsis: education of noun which deleted the phrase these days.

16.    I agree with the writer who says that about publics participation for education is importance.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): I refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti

17.    He says that the education not only managed by government, but also the society has contribution to build education together, about how they create  good education, both the facilities, system and soon.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): He refers to Miftakhul Khoiri

§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the government and the society

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

18.    The government should think that all society level can enjoy education reasonably.

19.    Moreover, to get education with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school  and that also is for rich man children.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

20.    I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): I refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti

21.    The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. I think that this statement is true.

§      Reference (Anaphoric): the writer refers to Miftakhul Khoiri

§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the poor people

§      Reference (Anaphoric): I refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti

22.    The government and the private school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to enjoy education.

§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

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Katy Perry: A true entertainer

Dina Indrasafitri, The Jakarta Post, Jakarta | Fri, 01/20/2012 8:36 AM 

JP/Wendra Ajistyatama Pop singer Katheryn Elizabeth Hudson, popularly known as Katy Perry, performed in front of a sell-out crowd in Sentul, Bogor, south of Jakarta, on Thursday night, banishing rumors that the American pop sensation had canceled at the last minute.

Perry, who grew up listening exclusively to religious music until her teenage years, entertained thousands of fans with her “old” singles “Ur So Gay” and “I Kissed a Girl” as well as more upbeat, dance-happy songs such as “Last Friday Night” and “California Gurls” from her newest album, Teenage Dream.

The set, which was designed as a wonderland of candy, featured glittery costumes and dynamic choreography. Energetic Perry performed several unexpected stunts, including sliding under the legs of all of the dancers and asking a male audience member to come up on stage, and then kissing him. She chose the man after announcing that she would invite up to the stage the first man in the crowd to take his shirt off.

About 7,000 people were at the show, which was part of Perry’s “California Dreams” tour, organized by Ismaya Live, FMLive! and Soundrhythm.

Prior to the show, audience members were given options of how to kill the time while waiting for the main act, including performances by local bands, Ran and Mike’s Apartment.

The committee provided free buses to drive around 1,000 ticket holders who had registered online from Jl. Sudirman, Central Jakarta, to the venue, located more than an hour’s drive from the city center. A line of cars a kilometer long stretched back from the venue before the show as other ticket holders arrived in their cars.

The ordeal, however, seemed to be a trifle matter for Eki Anissa, a student from Bandung, who described Perry as “fit to be a role model”. “I really want to see her perform ‘Peacock’ because it’s a fun song.”

ANALYSIS:

• Cohesion

®       Reference

1.      Her refer to Katy Perry.

2.      Him refer to a male audience member.

3.      The man refer to the first man in the crowd.

4.      His refer to the first man in the crowd.

5.      Holders refer to people who had registered online.

6.      Their refer to holders.

®       Conjunction

1.      And to connect “Ur So Gay” and “I Kissed a Girl”.

2.      And to connect “Last Friday Night” and “California Gurls”.

3.      And to connect featured glittery costumes and dynamic choreography.

4.      And to connect FMLive! and Soundrhythm.

5.      And to connect Ran and Mike’s Apartment.

6.      For to present the main act.

7.      While to connect toward dependent sentence.

®       Substitution

1.      It to replacement ‘Peacock’

• Diexis

®       Person diexis

1.      Her refer to Katy Perry.

2.      Him refer to a male audience member.

3.      The man refer to the first man in the crowd.

4.      His refer to the first man in the crowd.

5.      Holders refer to people who had registered online.

6.      Their refer to holders.

®       Temporal diexis

1.      On thursday night

2.      At the last minute

3.      Prior to the show