Minggu, 22 April 2012

DA Assignment 2

Writing Summary by Fitri Nurwiyanti
1.        An article in Campus magazine entitled “Public Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the first school Taman Siswa built by Ki Hajar Dewantara.
§      Collocation: Taman Siswa with Ki Hajar Dewantara
§      Metonymy: article with Campus magazine
2.        Education paradigma is growing in Indonesia to fulfill the spirit of education these days.
§      Hyponymy: education paradigma with education these day
3.        Citizens should get competent education. Education is responsibility by goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.
4.        Because of limited cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better than government schools.
§      Conjunction (hypotactic): because of
§      Conjunction (paratactic): and, or
5.        Supported by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it also promises the good management on its education.
§      Reference (anaphoric): this school refers to a type of school having business education.
6.        Indonesia has pesantren as education system (Islamic boarding house model).
§      Synonymy: pesantren with Islamic boarding house model
7.        It is classified in to two model; First Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can stay and study freely.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): it refers to pesantren
§      Synonymy: model with pesantren
§      Ellipse: Traditional of noun which is deleted the word pesantren
§      Reference (Anaphoric and Cataphoric): it refers to Traditional pesantren
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and
8.        They study about Islamic science for the sake of individual and public.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the students
9.        The traditional pesantren still be one choice by our society under class social.
10.    Second, Modern pesantren collects the payment of the students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students.
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and
§      Reference (Anaphoric): it refers to modern pesantren
11.    They do not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They are prepared to face the era that always changes.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the students
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and
§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to modern pesantren
12.    Without already realized the friction that could be happened from motivation or organizer and management of existing education.
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and, or
13.    To get the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for rich man children.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): their and they refers to goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and
14.    Poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): they and their refers to poor people
15.    Government and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their education inspect that aims on making organization of education.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): their refers to goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.
§      Ellipsis: education of noun which deleted the phrase these days.
16.    I agree with the writer who says that about publics participation for education is importance.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): I refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti
17.    He says that the education not only managed by government, but also the society has contribution to build education together, about how they create  good education, both the facilities, system and soon.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): He refers to Miftakhul Khoiri
§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the government and the society
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and
18.    The government should think that all society level can enjoy education reasonably.
19.    Moreover, to get education with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school  and that also is for rich man children.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to goverment and the side of private sector individual and group.
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and
20.    I think that the middle society should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): I refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti
21.    The writer says that the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. I think that this statement is true.
§      Reference (Anaphoric): the writer refers to Miftakhul Khoiri
§      Reference (Anaphoric): they refers to the poor people
§      Reference (Anaphoric): I refers to Fitri Nurwiyanti
22.    The government and the private school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence to enjoy education.
§      Conjunction (Paratactic): and

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